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It appears a time when each is controlled by forces that are outside of him. Neither one of them has no power whatsoever over it. For Paul, it is when he follows the German Soloist after a concert. Cather writes, “After a concert was over ...” (Cather…). In Araby, comes a time when the boy cannot control the situation, he cannot understand what is happening to him, he says, “Her name sprang to my lips at moments in strange prayers and praises which I myself did not understand. ........” (Joyce….). In Barn Burning, Starty has experienced the same situation. When the judge asks him to tell the truth, the thing that his father taught him about white men being their enemies, was all he can think of, “The boy said nothing. Enemy! Enemy! He .......” (Faulkner…).